本期新通教育雅思寫作老師通過一篇劍橋官方的雅思范文,來為同學們分析雅思寫作混合類大作文的特點。
雅思寫作大作文混合類這種類型也是我們考的非常多的題型。今天我們就通過劍橋官方的一篇范文來看一下混合類這種題型我們在寫的時候要注意的問題。我們希望通過這篇的分析,讓大家知道這類題型我們在寫的時候應該按照怎樣的結構去安排,每段安排什么內容。
當然在講個這個之前,我們先講解一下什么叫做報告類,什么叫做混合類。報告類是有兩個開放性的問題,比如問某個現(xiàn)象的原因是什么,然后怎么解決。而我們混合類是有一個開放性的問題,而另一個則是直接回答的,比如同不同意,positive 或者是negative,所以叫做混合。
題目: Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think are effective?
There is no doubt that traffic and pollution from vehicles have become huge problems, both in cities and on motorways everywhere. Solving these problems is likely to need more than a simple rise in the price of petrol.
While it is undeniable that private car use is one of the main causes of the increase in traffic and pollution, higher fuel costs are unlikely to limit the number of drivers for long. As this policy would also affect the cost of public transport, it would be very unpopular with everyone who needs to travel on the roads. But there are various other measures that could be implemented that would have a huge effect on these problems.
To tackle the problem of pollution, cleaner fuels need to be developed. The technology is already available to produce electric cars that would be both quieter and cleaner to use. Persuading manufacturers and travelers to adopt this new technology would be a more effective strategy for improving air quality, especially in cities.
However, traffic congestion will not be solved by changing the type of private vehicle that people can use. To do this, we need to improve the choice of public transport services available to travelers. For example, if sufficient sky trains and underground train systems were built and effectively maintained in our major cities, then traffic on the roads would be dramatically reduced. Long-distance train and coach services should be made attractive and affordable alternatives to driving our own car for long journeys.
In conclusion, I think that long-term traffic and pollution reductions would depend on educating the public to use public transport more, and on governments using public money to construct and run efficient systems.
文章首段引完題后直接回答了第一個問題,就是只提高價格是不夠解決這個問題的。
在第2段中,作者先讓步后轉折,指出有作用,但并不能起到長久的作用。后面又指出了這個政策的問題就是也會影響公共交通,所以并不會受歡迎。后面提到可以實施其他措施。
第3段開始回答第二個問題,提出了第一種措施,就是發(fā)展清潔能源。
第4段中作者又提出這個措施只能解決污染的問題,但交通擁堵不能被這個措施解決。所以又提出第二個解決措施,就是發(fā)展公共交通。
第5段中,作者對解決這個問題的方法進行了總結。
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