雅思寫作如何寫出個性化表達

雅思寫作如何寫出個性化表達 。在千篇一律的說理式文章中顯得更為出眾，給考官留下好的印象,雅思寫作個性化表達很有必要從語言說上比較具體，考生在語言組織方面也會輕松很多。那么如何進行雅思寫作個性化表達呢?本文將從議論文的引言段、主體段和結尾段出發(fā)，分析一些具有個性化思路的范文，并總結一些議論文個性化表達的方案。下面和小編一起來看看吧：

雅思寫作個性化表達一，引言段部分的個性化表達：

一個好的引言段對議論文的作用不言而喻，比較常規(guī)的寫法是在引言段的開始對議論文的話題作背景陳述，通常是大致介紹考題中所涉及的事物或行為在當今社會的總體情況或特征。這種寫作方式中規(guī)中矩，但很難表現(xiàn)出個性化色彩。導致很多文章總是在用“Nowadays…”、“With the development of…”等千篇一律的套句。而個性化的表達可以使文章的背景介紹與自己的親身經歷相結合，使文章變得更為鮮活，開頭段便顯得與眾不同，引起考官的注意。下面來看一個例子： People in the modern world are enjoying greater wealth but they are not as fit and active as they were in the past. What are the reasons? Suggest some measures to solve this problem.

個性化引言段

I keep on nodding in agreement when seeing the background information of the question. I myself have always been struggling not to be overweight. Unfortunately, like most others, I failed. As to why people nowadays are not as fit and active as they were, various factors can be identified.

雅思寫作個性化表達二，主體段(理由段)中的個性化表達：

主體段(理由段)是比較難以進行個性化表達的部分，或者說在理由段進行個性化表達要特別注意“分寸”，因為如果理由段中的個性化表達過多，則會造成前文所說到的降低文章論據“普遍實用性”和說服力的結果。那么如何達到個性化和說服力的平衡性呢?我們可以先看幾段文字：

Tele-education has been playing an increasingly significant role in modern education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

個性化理由段-討論telecommunication的優(yōu)點

In classrooms across most parts of the developed world you will see an array of telecommunications equipment from TVs to computers. This technology allows students greater contact with the outside……I remember attending a small rural primary school, but watching the landing of people on the moon.

Some people warn that the era of the silver screen is coming to an end and that people will eventually lose interest in going to the cinema. Do you agree or disagree with this view?

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個性化理由段-討論interest in going to the cinema

However, the cinemas in my home country are still full every weekend and when a new film is released we are all keen to go and watch it. In fact, many small cinemas have been rebuilt and we can now go to large centres that have six or eight cinema screens and show up to ten different films a night. An evening out at the cinema is fun and some films, particularly horror and science fiction films, are much better on the big screen.

There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

個性化理由段-討論international music重要性

However, there is one reason why international music may be more important, and that is since it is widely liked internationally, it helps unite the world. I noticed this in Korea, when I saw young Korean boys dancing in unison to modern rock music. The traditional Korean music is often too difficult, high toned and not relevant to the lives of younger people.

在第一段話種，作者結合自己童年在學�？吹窃轮辈サ慕洑v說明“tele-education”的好處。在第二段話中，作者結合自己國家的電影市場情況說，說明人們還是有興趣去電影院看電影的;在第三段話中，作者結合自己去韓國旅游的所見所聞證明了國際音樂的重要性�？梢钥闯觯�這兩個主體段的理由陳述都是和個人經歷相結合的，所以文章顯得很有個性化，但卻完全不失辯論力度。這樣的理由段寫作方法也是值得教學中讓學生體會和嘗試的。

雅思寫作個性化表達三，結尾段中的個性化表達：

在議論文寫作中，結尾段通常是觀點的重申。很多學生因為表達方式的缺乏，會覺得重述觀點是一件比較困難的事，因此文章匆忙結尾。而適當加入個性化的思路表達，可以使文章的結尾變得更加生動。比如下面這段結尾：People in the modern world are enjoying greater wealth but they are not as fit and active as they were in the past. What are the reasons? Suggest some measures to solve this problem.

結尾段強調保持健康的重要性：

I believe that all of us can imagine the daring consequences of living a life without a sound body. Therefore I decide to walk home instead of taking a taxi.

再比如說這個G類的題目：

Some people think it is better for people to change their career at least once in their life and do different kinds of jobs. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

結尾段再次重申應該換職業(yè)：

I’ve had five jobs in the past fifteen years, but all in the same industry. Therefore, I’m always ready to take a brand-new career path. Or I’ll regret it later that I never try something different even once in my life. I believe the best is yet to come.

總而言之，雅思寫作個性化表達可以出現(xiàn)在文章的引言段、主體段和結尾段，這些個性化的文字與傳統(tǒng)說理辯論式語言一樣，都能夠達到清晰地提出或證明觀點的目的。巧妙地使用這些個性化的語言和思路，可以使文章的辯論變得“平易近人”且別具一格。小編預祝同學們在雅思考試中取得好的成績。

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