在雅思大作文寫作中,考生頭疼的內容不外乎語言和思路兩部分。本文中,新通雅思培訓中心的專家將以2014年的雅思寫作真題為例,對不同話題的問題進行思路擴展。詳細咨詢歡迎來電! 免費咨詢電話:400-618-0272
在雅思大作文寫作中,考生頭疼的內容不外乎語言和思路兩部分。本文中,新通雅思培訓中心的專家將以2014年的雅思寫作真題為例,對不同話題的問題進行思路擴展。首先,我們將講解比較類話題的答題思路。此類問題高分的難點在于思路的復雜程度。如何讓自己的行文思路看起來比其他考生要高一等級,是追求7分以上同學需要解決的問題。
一、比較類問題答題思路及特點
問題類型:
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
答題思路:
此類問題要求考生從正反兩方面對同一觀點進行綜合分析,并進行比較,從而得出該觀點是好處大于壞處,還是壞處多于好處。在解答此類問題時,我們建議考生采用2:1的寫作手法,即認為多的那一方面寫2點,少的一方面寫1點。
很多考生會采用一種比較簡單的寫作手法,即直接論述題目中所提觀點的好處和壞處。雖然這種寫法容易掌握,但很難取得高分。沖擊高分還需要考生進行更為復雜的思考。因為,在比較的過程當中,如果考生選擇好處大于壞處,通常這個缺陷是可以被克服的。也就是說,考生不僅要說出它有什么壞處,還要提供相應的解決方案。這樣的寫作思路不僅使文章的邏輯看起來更加完整,而且可以減輕字數(shù)對考生的壓力。
而如果選擇壞處多,那么好處的選擇就要格外注意,即不能使好處看起來更為重要。最好這種觀點帶來的好處是可以通過其它方式取得的。這樣一來,它的壞處就顯得非常重要。比如,“Do the advantages of watching TV outweigh its disadvantages?” 如果考生選擇看電視壞處比較多,那么它的好處最好不要是開闊人們的視野、提升人們在相關領域的興趣,因為這樣的好處是人們渴望得到的。我們可以選擇看電視能夠讓人們放松,但由于放松的方式有很多,這樣看電視的好處就被弱化了。
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二、寫作思路及范文詳解
下面,我們就以2014年4月的雅思寫作真題為例,對這類問題的答題思路進行細致講解。
In most countries, with the widespread of the use of Internet, people have more freedom to choose to work and study at home instead of travelling to work or college. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
面對此類問題,考生不需要立刻做出選擇。比較明智的做法是盡可能多的羅列出這種觀點的優(yōu)點和缺點,然后比較它們更有利于自己的寫作。
人們選擇在家工作的好處:
1、方便,省時
2、免于外界的打擾,更容易全身心的投入到工作當中
3、能夠更好的協(xié)調工作和家庭的關系,方便照顧家人
人們選擇在家工作的壞處:
沒有太多和他人交流的機會
根據(jù)比較,我們會發(fā)現(xiàn)在家工作的好處比較多,壞處相對較少,所以如果我們認為“在家工作的好處比壞處多”這一點,寫作的難度會比較低。此外,選擇在家工作的壞處之一就是切斷了自己與外界的聯(lián)系,那么如何克服這一點呢?我們的解決方案是多參加和同學或同事的聚會,或主動約朋友出來相聚,自己創(chuàng)造和別人溝通交流的機會?傊诩夜ぷ鞯膲奶幨强梢员豢朔,但它的好處給我們帶來的是實實在在的福利。
下面,是針對這篇文章的一篇范文。通過這篇文章,希望考生可以真切的體會到此類問題的思路構成過程。
Thanks to the technical development, especially the appearance of Internet, increasing number of people prefer to work and study at home, rather than traveling to work or college. Two benefits brought by working or studying at home convince me to strongly insist that its merits do outweigh its drawbacks.
To begin with, working and studying at home is able to save our time and makes our life more convenient. It is not uncommon phenomenon that people are waiting for the bus or subway in a long queue and not a few people are late for work or class due to the traffic jam. So, if we can choose to work and study at home, it is not necessary for us to take hours on the way to companies and schools. Besides, working and studying at home gives us a more flexible timetable. We do not have to wake up at 6 o’clock in the morning to arrive in the company on time. We are able to decide when we start and stop the work, based on our physical and psychological conditions. The same thing occurs to study as well. We will not see any students falling asleep in the class any more. Therefore, our working and studying efficiency will be highly improved.
What’s more, our family connection will be enhanced by working and studying at home. Resulting from the heavy social and living pressure, a lot of parents have to leave their children alone at home and go to work, which makes them spend little time with their children. That is the reason why many parents do not understand their kids very well. If those parents can work at home, they can handle their work and spend more time with their children at the same time. By doing this, parents can know more about their children and exchange emotions and ideas with each other. Then, distance among family members will be shortened and the family relationship could be strengthened.
On the other hand, working and studying at home blames for blocking people’s channel to communicate with others. It may possible lead people to feel isolated and lonely. However, I think we can avoid such consequence with suitable approaches. One solution to it is that people can actively take part in the party held by their classmates or colleagues. As another key, people can make a call to their friends to have a dinner and share each others’ experiences as well.
To my conclusion, those two benefits of working and studying at home are obvious and make us live more comfortable with flexible timetable and close personal relationship. And the so called limitation of doing that can be overcome by several methods. Therefore, I strongly believe that the advantages of working and studying at home are far more than the disadvantages of it.
在這篇范文中,作者提出了兩點好處,并加以細致的論述。而在缺點的論述部分,作者并沒有花太多的時間在缺點的產(chǎn)生原因上面,而是解釋了如何克服這個缺點。這樣既不走題,也可以突出在家工作學習的好處,各位考生可以適當借鑒。除此之外,這篇范文中的中心句可以很好的表達每一段的核心大意,這也是各位考生需要學習的重點之一。
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