支招：雅思寫作如何出彩

 一、避免使用語意弱的“be”動詞。

1、把句中的表語轉(zhuǎn)換為不同的修飾語。

這個技巧并不是那么容易掌握，但是確實是一個能夠提高雅思寫組成績的非常實用的技巧。

例如：

Weak：The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab.

Revision：The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (轉(zhuǎn)換為前置定語)

Or：The landscape， bare and brown， begged for spring green. (轉(zhuǎn)換為并列結(jié)構(gòu)作后置定語)

2、將作表語用的形容詞或名詞變?yōu)樾袨閯釉~。

例如：

1) Weak：The team members are good players.

Revision：The team members play well.

2) Weak：One worker's plan is the elimination of tardiness.

Revision：One worker's plan eliminates tardiness.

3、在以“here”或“there”開頭的句子中，把“be”動詞后的名詞代詞變成改寫句的主語。

例如：

1) Weak：There is no opportunity for promotion.

Revision：No opportunity for promotion exists.

2) Weak：Here are the books you ordered.

Revision：The books you ordered have arrived.

二、多用語意具體的動詞，保持句意簡潔明了。

這樣的具體描寫可以讓文章看起來更具說服力，當(dāng)然也就可以提高雅思寫作成績了。

例如：

1、Poor：My supervisor went past my desk.

Better：My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk.

2、Poor：She is a careful shopper.

Better：She compares prices and quality.

三、盡量運(yùn)用主動語態(tài)。

之所以要這樣做，是因為很多人不明白什么時候該用主動，什么時候該用被動。用錯了，當(dāng)然也就談不上提高雅思寫作成績了。

例如：

1、Weak：The organization has been supported by charity.

Better：Charity has supported the organization.

2、Weak：The biscuits were stacked on a plate.

Better：Mother stacked the biscuits on a plate.

四、防止使用語意冗長累贅的詞語。

想要提高雅思寫作成績就得使寫作的用詞簡單，生動。

例如：

1、Wordy：My little sister has a preference for chocolate milk.

Improved：My little sister prefers chocolate milk.

2、Wordy：We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your recommendations.

Improved：We have received your letter and intended to follow your recommendation.

3、Redundant：We had a serious crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.

Improved：We had a crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.

4、Redundant：My sister and I bought the same， identical dress in different stores.

Improved：My sister and I bought the same dress in different stores.

五、杜絕濫用陳舊詞語或難懂的專業(yè)術(shù)語。

這是語言考試，不是專業(yè)考試，提高雅思寫作成績的關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)在語言上，是文章的表現(xiàn)力上!

例如：

1、Weak：They will not agree to his proposals in any shape or form.

Improved：They will not agree to any of his proposals.

2、Weak：I need her financial input before I can guesstimate our expenditures next fall.

Improved：I need her financial figures before I can estimate our expenditures next fall.

以上便是雅思寫作的技巧介紹，希望大家活學(xué)活用，寫出出彩文章，斬獲高分！

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