雅思寫(xiě)作高分技巧：“一邊倒結(jié)構(gòu)”寫(xiě)法

辯論型雅思寫(xiě)作題目寫(xiě)法：一邊倒結(jié)構(gòu)

1、  雅思寫(xiě)作技巧之總體結(jié)構(gòu)

一邊倒寫(xiě)法的結(jié)構(gòu)共分四段或五段：
　　開(kāi)頭段
　　理由段1
　　理由段2
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　　結(jié)尾段
　　如果只寫(xiě)兩個(gè)理由段，就是四段；
　　如果寫(xiě)三個(gè)理由段，就是五段。

2、  雅思寫(xiě)作技巧之開(kāi)頭段

開(kāi)頭段一般寫(xiě)3-5句，它有以下三種寫(xiě)法：
　　第一種寫(xiě)法：
　�。�1句話介紹背景）+介紹雙方觀點(diǎn)+說(shuō)出自己的觀點(diǎn)（+引起下文）
　　第二種寫(xiě)法：
　�。�1句話介紹背景）+介紹對(duì)方觀點(diǎn)及其一到兩個(gè)理由+說(shuō)出自己的觀點(diǎn)（+引起下文）
　　第三種寫(xiě)法：
　　3句話左右介紹背景+說(shuō)出自己的觀點(diǎn)
　　開(kāi)頭段是使用模板式句型比較多的段落。其中：介紹雙方觀點(diǎn)、介紹對(duì)方觀點(diǎn)及其一到兩個(gè)理由、說(shuō)出自己的觀點(diǎn)和引用雙方下文，都可以使用模板式句型。
　　注意：其中介紹背景部分，不要使用模板式句型。

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如下面就是一個(gè)同學(xué)開(kāi)頭段的第一句：
　　In contemporary society, the human race is advancing at an unprecedented rate in a multitude of arenas.
　　下面是另一個(gè)同學(xué)開(kāi)頭段的第一句：
　　Recently, the problem of smoking has been brought to such popular attention that governments at all levels place it on the agenda as the first matter.
　　下面是另一個(gè)同學(xué)開(kāi)頭段的前兩句：
　　Nowadays, it is universally accepted that the issue of crimes is increasingly serious. But at the same time , controversy has arisen over whether the media should report  the details of crimes.
　　這三個(gè)開(kāi)頭段的第一句話或前兩句話雖然使用了很多好詞，但這樣的文章很可能得到5分甚至4分的低分。因?yàn)樵谖恼碌淖铋_(kāi)始，目標(biāo)太大，極易引起考官的反感，給你很低的分?jǐn)?shù)。有的同學(xué)，使用了模板式句型，分?jǐn)?shù)較低，實(shí)際上就是這個(gè)原因。 

 3.雅思寫(xiě)作技巧之理由段 

每個(gè)理由段的寫(xiě)法：
　　1句主題句+3句左右的支持句
　　其中每個(gè)理由段主題句前面的關(guān)聯(lián)詞，可以使用模板式句型。
　　第三個(gè)理由，有兩種寫(xiě)法：
　　第一種方法：和前兩個(gè)理由一樣，直接說(shuō)出理由。
　　第二種方法：反駁對(duì)方對(duì)自己的攻擊。先用一句話，說(shuō)出對(duì)方對(duì)自己的攻擊。然后用三記句左右反駁。

3、 雅思寫(xiě)作技巧之 結(jié)尾段
　　結(jié)尾段可以寫(xiě)1-5句，結(jié)尾段的通常寫(xiě)法：
　　重申觀點(diǎn)(+重申理由)（提出建議或希望等）
　　其中重申觀點(diǎn)，可以使用模板式句型。

下面，我們看一篇用一邊倒結(jié)構(gòu)寫(xiě)的一篇雅思寫(xiě)作范文。 

真題解析→  

雅思寫(xiě)作范文：
　　You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
　　Write about the following topic:
　　Some people propose that smoking should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
　　Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
　　You should write at least 250 words.

Sample Answer
　　Smoking is a social problem we are trying to solve. Some people suggest that the government should ban smoking. They hold the opinion that smoking is detrimental to people’s health and it violates the rights and freedom of nonsmokers. However, in my opinion,smoking should not be banned. The reasons are presented below.
　　The first reason that can be seen by every person is that tobacco is a wonderful commodity to tax..It contributes much to the goverment’s revenue. For example, the government of Britain collects enough from smokers to pay for its entire educational facilities. If smoking is banned, there will be a great drop in the government’s income. In addition, more serious social problems will arise, such as unemployment, beecause tabacco industry employs a lot of workers.Another factor that we must consider is that those who strongly approve of the ban lay too much emphasis on the rights of nonsmokers. They ignore smokers’ rights.Smoking is just a personal hobby and amusement. It is a kind of lifestyle. It is a stress reliever and can bring great pleasure to smokers. On the contrary, for smokers, nothing seems more diffcult and painful than giving up the habit.
We must admit that smoking is harmful to people’s health,However,the harm that smoking brings to people’s health, However, the harm that smoking brings to people’s health is exaggerated.As long as we smoke in moderation, it will not cause great harm to our body, Take Mr.Churchill as an example. He both smoked and enjoyed a long life.
　　From what has been discussed above.we may safely draw the conclusion that smoking should be banned. The tobacco industry makes a large contribution to the government’s economy. Smoking also brings smokers many psychological benefits. Moreover, there is no evidence showing the direct link between smoking and any fatal diseases.

考官評(píng)分：7

分析說(shuō)明：
　　使用一邊倒結(jié)構(gòu)，寫(xiě)了五段。
　　第一段：采用第二種寫(xiě)法，第一句話介紹背景，然后介紹對(duì)方觀點(diǎn)（政府應(yīng)該禁止吸煙）即其兩個(gè)理由（吸煙危害健康而且侵犯非吸煙者的權(quán)利和自由），然后說(shuō)出自己的觀點(diǎn)：不應(yīng)該徹底禁止吸煙。最后一句話是引起下文。
　　第二段：第一個(gè)理由，吸煙在經(jīng)濟(jì)上貢獻(xiàn)稅收，增加就業(yè)。
　　第三段：第二個(gè)理由，吸煙會(huì)給吸煙者帶來(lái)一些心理上的好處。
　　第四段：第三個(gè)理由，反駁對(duì)方，吸煙對(duì)身體的危害被夸大了，只要適量，不會(huì)對(duì)身體造成很大傷害，然后舉例子，丘吉爾先生又吸煙又長(zhǎng)壽。這個(gè)理由比較新穎，是本文的加分點(diǎn)之一。
　　第五段：先重申觀點(diǎn)，然后重申理由。
　　在語(yǔ)言上，使用了很多好的詞匯和句型，使用了一些模板式句型，但也不是很多。

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