吐血整理：托福寫(xiě)作中被秒殺的開(kāi)頭！

每一位參加托福寫(xiě)作考試的同學(xué)都希望有一個(gè)“鳳頭”，因而絞盡腦汁去“創(chuàng)作”，結(jié)果知道成績(jī)，卻是感到滿滿的挫敗感！小編在此帶來(lái)吐血整理：托福寫(xiě)作中被秒殺的開(kāi)頭，想要托福高分，大家可要仔細(xì)繞開(kāi)！

托福寫(xiě)作中被秒殺的開(kāi)頭1：過(guò)分簡(jiǎn)單沒(méi)有重點(diǎn)(吐血指數(shù)：☆☆)

典型失敗案例：Topic-The importance of environmental protection

This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!

托福寫(xiě)作中被秒殺的開(kāi)頭2：用詞不當(dāng) 表達(dá)不準(zhǔn) (吐血指數(shù)：☆☆)

典型失敗案例：Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family.

托福寫(xiě)作中被秒殺的開(kāi)頭3：意思重復(fù)原地踏步(吐血指數(shù)：☆☆☆)

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典型失敗案例：Topic-Your opinion on DINK families

My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society。

托福寫(xiě)作中被秒殺的開(kāi)頭4：中國(guó)俗語(yǔ)胡亂翻譯(吐血指數(shù)：☆☆☆☆☆)

典型失敗案例：

Topic 1-Is it good to have a large family?

I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: “Many sons, many lucks”……

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Topic 2 -Should we pretend to know everything or admit our ignorance?

We all know, our Chinese old fathers and grandfathers said: “Know is know, don’t know is don’t know”……

Topic 3- Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/her family?

Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix, rat’s son can make hole……

以上就是托福寫(xiě)作禁忌，絕對(duì)不可出現(xiàn)的托福寫(xiě)作開(kāi)頭的介紹。這些錯(cuò)誤大家要十分注意，經(jīng)常會(huì)出現(xiàn)在我們的托福寫(xiě)作中，希望同學(xué)們謹(jǐn)慎繞開(kāi)哦！

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