拒絕失分！托福寫作中人物性別稱呼要慎用

考托的同學(xué)們千萬注意！托福寫作里的人物性別稱呼要慎用！托福寫作中，盡量不用通性代詞he，除了明確地指代一個(gè)男性人物時(shí)，都要設(shè)法避免使用之�？梢愿鶕�(jù)語境需要，選用下列替換方式：

　　托福寫作技巧一：采用復(fù)數(shù)形式：
　　Sexist： When bathing a baby， never leave him unattended.
　　Revised： When bathing babies， never leave them unattended.
　　給嬰兒洗澡時(shí)，一定不能讓他們無人照料。

　　托福寫作技巧二：用we/us/our改寫原句：
　　Sexist：From each according to his abilities， to each according to his needs.
　　Revised：From each of us according to our abilities， to each of us according to our needs.
　　各盡所能，按需分配。

　　托福寫作技巧三：改用第二人稱：
　　Sexist： No man knows his true character until he has run out of gas， purchased something on the installment plan and raised an adolescent.
　　Revised： You don‘t know what your true character is until you have run out of gas， purchased something on the ! installment plan and raised an adolescent.
　　只有當(dāng)汽車大的油用光了，按分規(guī)付款方式購物和撫養(yǎng)大一個(gè)孩子時(shí)，人的本來品性才會(huì)顯露出來。

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　　托福寫作技巧四：改用被動(dòng)語態(tài)
　　Sexist： One who， when he has the choice of two evils， chooses both.
　　Revised： One who， when given the choice of two evils， chooses both.
　　一個(gè)在兩種惡行之中要作出選擇就兩者都選的人。

　　托福寫作技巧五：完全省略代詞：
　　Sexist： What a person thinks of after he becomes a departee?
　　Revised： What a person thinks of after becoming a departee?
　　一個(gè)人離去后，會(huì)作何感想呢?

　　托福寫作技巧六：用冠詞替代：
　　Sexist： Can a critic give his opinion of an omelet without being asked to make one?
　　Revised： Can a critic give an opinion of...?
　　評(píng)論家議論煎蛋時(shí)難道到非要他去自己煎雞蛋嗎?

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