B”題型的一道真題,并對(duì)此題進(jìn)行解析,并提供了托福寫作范文,通過這篇文章可以認(rèn)識(shí)到托福獨(dú)立寫作的全篇結(jié)構(gòu)和展開順序。' />
小編整理了托福寫作“A>B”題型的一道真題,并對(duì)此題進(jìn)行解析,并提供了托福寫作范文,通過這篇文章可以認(rèn)識(shí)到托福獨(dú)立寫作的全篇結(jié)構(gòu)和展開順序。
托福寫作真題:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teaching is harder than it was in the past.
托福寫作解析:
這是一道典型的托福寫作“A>B”題型,筆者認(rèn)為“現(xiàn)在教學(xué)比過去更難”比較好寫,即同意題目。具體思路如下:
托福寫作范文及解析:
理由一:現(xiàn)在教學(xué)很困難,因?yàn)榧议L的要求越來越多。不可否認(rèn),現(xiàn)在的家長希望自己的子女在各個(gè)方面的表現(xiàn)都能比同齡人更好,因此他們極其重視小孩的教育,這相應(yīng)地增加了教學(xué)的壓力。( + 具體事例)但是,過去家長讓孩子上學(xué)最主要的目的就是希望他們考高分,然后畢業(yè)能找到好工作來養(yǎng)家糊口。換句話說,過去教學(xué)比較專注于成績。Teaching is extremely difficult today, because parents are expecting for more. It’s undeniable that parents nowadays wish that their kids can have a better performance in all respects than their peers do. Hence, parents are paying lots of attention to their kids’ education, which increases the pressure of teaching accordingly.( + 具體事例) However, the major goal of those parents in the past is that their children can get a high grade in school and thus are able to support the family by landing a good job. In other words, teaching in old days only concentrated on kids’ academic performance.
理由二:現(xiàn)在教學(xué)很困難,因?yàn)楝F(xiàn)在的小孩不好管理。隨著人口的急劇增長,很多國家都開始實(shí)施一些政策來控制人口數(shù)量。因此,獨(dú)生子女家庭越來越多,而被寵壞的小孩也越來越多,這使得小孩在學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)的時(shí)候越來越不受老師管束,甚至阻礙教學(xué)的進(jìn)行。( + 具體事例)然而,過去家庭的小孩都比較多,父母不會(huì)特意地去專寵某一個(gè);而且,過去艱難的生活條件也讓孩子能更早地成熟和懂事。Teaching is significantly hard in contemporary society, since it’s not a simple task to manage children today. As the population increases greatly, many countries start enacting some policies to control the number of people. So, the family with only one child is expanding, and there are more and more spoiled kids, which makes it tough for teachers to supervise and to manage them in the school and even sets obstacles for teaching.( + 具體事例)But in the past, a family usually had several kids, and parents could not possibly dote on only one of them. What’s more, the poor living standard in old days would make children become mature and sensible earlier.
結(jié)尾段:雖然過去由于設(shè)備落后的原因,教學(xué)也不是那么方便、簡單。但是,和“理由一”、“理由二”沒法比。因此,我認(rèn)為現(xiàn)在教學(xué)更困難。In the final analysis, we can’t deny that sometimes teaching might be hard in the past, due to the undeveloped facilities. However, when compared with these explanation and details I just provided to support my position, the opposite opinion looks particularly lackluster. Consequently, I’m still convinced that teaching is harder today than it was in the past, for parents now have more requirement and children are too spoiled.
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