雅思寫作大作文如何避免官腔

如下面關(guān)于“work at home or study at home”的一段例證：

IBM, one of the business giants, has saved nearly 70 million US dollars in its northeastern region by promoting telecommuting, which has been a driving force to other enterprises to convert their normal working staff into telecommuters. Companies in Japan are one of them and plan to launch the scheme in 2009, which, in turn, spiritually wins more supports from the existing employees, and attracts new hires. 這段話中的2個(gè)例子(商業(yè)巨頭IBM和日本的企業(yè)計(jì)劃)都較好地完成了“若員工選擇在家上班，會對公司帶來積極的作用”這一證明。

此外，提醒考生們需要注意的是，雅思大作文明確指出“give reasons or examples from your own experience”, 這里的“your own experience”和“your personal experience”是完全不同的概念。前者是指通過個(gè)人的學(xué)習(xí)和總結(jié)而獲得的經(jīng)驗(yàn)，后者是指個(gè)人經(jīng)歷或周圍某個(gè)個(gè)體的故事。如談到“working hard produces better results”, “your own experience”的例子一定是“some 3-year-high school students usually stay up late to review lessons and prepare for next day classes”, 而“your personal experience”的例子則應(yīng)該是“my roommate, Tony has always been working hard on studies and staying up late every night”, 不難看出兩者的區(qū)別。故雅思大作文是不能使用個(gè)人案例的論據(jù)的，這一點(diǎn)與新托福的寫作也是不同的。

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另外，數(shù)據(jù)論證也是一個(gè)重要的方法，同時(shí)也是國外文章中非常常見的。使用這種方式，需要注意兩點(diǎn)：數(shù)據(jù)和數(shù)據(jù)的來源。數(shù)據(jù)的真實(shí)性不重要，但至少要看上去是“真實(shí)的”。如：A survey by the latest Ministry of Labour’s opinion poll shows that more companies would like to open their doors to disabled people, as long as they can access to modern technology, and the rate has been increasing every year by 5% since 2003.

使用數(shù)據(jù)論證，提醒考生們不要刻意將數(shù)據(jù)夸張，這樣反而會降低數(shù)據(jù)的真實(shí)可靠性。常見的句型有“a survey by….shows that / a research by….finds out that / a study by….suggests that / Statistics by….conclude that…”省略號的部分是需要根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容來填寫的數(shù)據(jù)來源出處或機(jī)構(gòu)。常用的機(jī)構(gòu)包括：國外大學(xué)、學(xué)院、報(bào)紙、雜志、電視臺、之聲、網(wǎng)站、研究機(jī)構(gòu)、民意調(diào)查等。我們按順序給大家做一個(gè)示范：the University of Sussex, Business College of several European countries, the USATODAY, state media CNN, BBC Talking Point, Childwise, American Institute for Research, Harris Interactive Poll等，考生可按照自己的情況，來準(zhǔn)備幾個(gè)備選方案以供使用。