【教師原創(chuàng)】2015年3月14日托福寫作考情解析

 綜合寫作：

 藥品廣告到底好不好。

 閱讀：

文章認(rèn)為藥品廣告不好，因?yàn)閺V告不客觀，列舉了medication television advertisements的三個(gè)缺陷

1、advertisements不能公正表現(xiàn)藥品的作用，容易導(dǎo)致misuse，

2、廣告播出后的藥物售賣most dramatic

3、政府不能有效控制。

聽力反駁：

1、Consumers have their own ideas，顧客可以自己do research

2、藥物售賣does not mean misuse，因?yàn)榇蠹抑�前不知道這個(gè)產(chǎn)品現(xiàn)在知道了。還舉了個(gè)戒煙的例子

3、政府可以采取措施such as punishment. Companies have a reason to follow the rules。

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獨(dú)立寫作：

Many people spend too much money on pets even though there are better uses of money. Do you agree or disagree this opinion?

It is true that pet ownership in the modern society has increased significantly. And people who are obsessed with their pets tend to splurge on these furry companions. But this is not without criticism. From my point of view, there is no absolute correct view on consuming, and every single individual has right to decide how much they spend on their pets.

First of all, people consume a lot on their pets due to the fact that they treat these animals as their family members. Thanks to the progress of science technology, people are able to communicate with family, friends, colleagues and others regardless of time and geographical limitations, but their relations are also isolated. So they choose pets as their companion in their life. For old folk and some families, such as those without children, pets can improve their well-being, which makes their high consumption on these cute creatures reasonable and understandable. 

In the second place, high expenditure on pets can be attributed to the high consumption level of pet industry, which includes pet grooming, pet boarding, pet food and so on. Although different people establish different living standards for their pets, these animals’ basic needs on food, healthcare, housing require large sums of money.

On the other hand, some critics have expressed their concern about lavish spending on pets, since they believe that there are far more noble things to spend money, such as helping people who are homeless. However, there is nothing inherently better about using one's resources for charitable purposes than for keeping pets.

 In conclusion, I am convinced that it is proper for people to spend a large amount of money on their pets, because these animals play essential roles in their lives. And it is personal choice to spend their money.原創(chuàng)例文by石珍嬌老師

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