雅思小作文開頭段改寫方法

本文將以下面這道小作文題目為例，分析一下小作文開頭段改寫的方法：

The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999.

1 句型改寫
　　The graph shows/gives the information about_________ (原題）
　　The focus of the graph is fixed on the introduction of________             .
　　The main concern of the graph is to introduce/ compare________

2 時(shí)間改寫
　　between March 1993 and March 1999 ——during the period from March 1993 to March 1999

3 國(guó)家地名改寫（具體——概括）
　　in US and Japan——in two different countries
　　至此可改寫為：The focus of  the line chart is fixed on the introduction of the unemployment rates in two different countries( US and Japan) during the period from March 1993 to March 1999

4 同義詞替換
　　the unemployment rates——the rates of unemployment
　　the jobless rates

5 名詞—— 從句 轉(zhuǎn)換    
　　unemployment rates——how unemployment rates changed
　　N——how N changed
　　changes in/of N ——how N changed
　　最終可改寫為：The focus of the line chart is fixed on the introduction of how unemployment rates changed in two different countries( US and Japan) during the period from March 1993 to March 1999.

根據(jù)以上方法可將  The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
　　改寫為：
　　The main concern of the pie charts is to compare how a UK school' s spending changed between 1981 and 2001.

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