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Task1:Table(靜態(tài)圖)

5個(gè)國家health spending的數(shù)據(jù)private 和public spending 描述和對(duì)比。

Task2:

Some people belive everyone has the right to get university education,to what extent do you agree government should make it free to all people no matter of their financial background?(有些人認(rèn)為每個(gè)人都有權(quán)利上大學(xué)。你同意嗎?大學(xué)教育是否應(yīng)該向所有人開放,不管他們的經(jīng)濟(jì)背景如何?)

分析:老題,可以結(jié)合“政府類話題”一起思考,下半年的作文出題走勢(shì)依舊按照上半年,仍然保持走老題、易寫的方向走。

寫作思路:

第一段:引入話題

第二段:當(dāng)然每個(gè)人都有權(quán)利接受教育,

1教育提高人們的工作能力

2高等教育為社會(huì)培養(yǎng)綜合型專業(yè)人才,促進(jìn)社會(huì)的持續(xù)發(fā)展

3政府的稅收中教育應(yīng)該占重要部分

第三段:但是

1 并非社會(huì)要求每個(gè)人都必須是綜合型專業(yè)人才,對(duì)技術(shù)工人的需要更大

2 政府在基礎(chǔ)教育上已經(jīng)投入大量財(cái)力,即使富裕的發(fā)達(dá)國家也無法支付所有大學(xué)生的學(xué)費(fèi)

3 學(xué)生在大學(xué)所學(xué)的知識(shí)幫助他們就業(yè),即學(xué)生本人也從大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)中獲得直接利益,因此應(yīng)該負(fù)擔(dān)一部分學(xué)費(fèi)。

第四段:大學(xué)學(xué)費(fèi)應(yīng)該視學(xué)生的經(jīng)濟(jì)狀況決定收費(fèi)方式,貧困學(xué)生應(yīng)該得到國家的財(cái)政補(bǔ)貼或無息貸款,幫助他們完成大學(xué)課程

詞匯拓展:

1.consensus 共識(shí)

2. controversial 有爭(zhēng)議的

3. as long as 只要

4. willing 意愿

5.imposes tax 征稅

6. allocate 分配

7. equip…with…使…具備…

8.specialized knowledge 專業(yè)知識(shí)

9. sustainable development 可持續(xù)發(fā)展

10. ensure 確保

11. in reality= in fact 實(shí)際上

12. affluent 富裕的

13.tertiary education= university education= higher education 高等教育

14.on top of = besides除了

15pulsory education義務(wù)教育

16.skilled workers 技術(shù)工人

17.perspective 視角

18.in terms of 在…方面

19.academic knowledge 學(xué)術(shù)知識(shí)

20.empower 使…有能力

21.be employed 就業(yè)

22.independent economically經(jīng)濟(jì)獨(dú)立

23.life learning skills 終生學(xué)習(xí)的能力

24.theoretical subject 理論課

25. Accordingly 因此

26.carry responsibility 承擔(dān)責(zé)任

27.fund 資助

28.of great significance= significant 重大的

29.pragmatic 實(shí)際的

30.interest-free loan無息貸款

31.outstanding 優(yōu)秀的

32.tuition fee 學(xué)費(fèi)

范文:

There has always been a consensus opinion about who should pay for elementary or secondary education, but a controversial discuss has arisen about the responsibility of payment for higher education.

It is true that everyone has the right to get education including higher one as long as he or she has the willing and ability to reach. Providing education to the general public is the responsibility of any government that imposes tax and allocates part of it into such fundamental social sector as education. Universities equip students with specialized knowledge and skills which make capable labors for the society and ensure sustainable development of the society. However, in reality, totally depending on the government for university tuition fee is not a wise, pragmatic way of improving the educational level of a country.

In fact very few countries including many affluent developed ones are not able to offer free tertiary education to everyone on top of compulsory fundamental education. Meanwhile, no society requires every labor to be a professional, instead, a bigger proportion of skilled workers are needed in modern days. From another perspective to see this issue, students actually gain a lot from university not only in terms of academic knowledge which empower them to be employed and be independent economically,but also by gaining a clear perspective of life and life learning skills through theoretical subject study. Accordingly, students should also carry some financial responsibility.

In my opinion, the issue of university tuition fee is not only a personal matter, but also of great significance to the society as a whole. Both the government and students should take responsibility for the cost because they both benefit a lot. A practical suggestion can be that the government fund university education by offering interest-free loan to those poor but outstanding students.

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