2015年5月16日托福寫作真題強化解析版

寫作

綜合寫作參考答案

None of the three possible methods to maintain the continuousgrowth of products in the reading will function as stated.

Firstly, from the perspective of product upgrading, the professor states his doubt, because according to the lecture, it argues that the old-fashion customers may not like the new version of product, and meanwhile, they’ll stop buying the old version, which makes them seem outdated. Therefore, the sales of both the new and the old version decrease.

Secondly, judging from the related version of product, the professor holds a different view, because referring to the lecture, most customers buy the new product, work boots, because they come from the company whose tractor is reliable, but the toughness of the tractor does not ensure a good quality of the boots. And if the boots are of inferior quality, the reputation of the company suffers.

Thirdly, on the point of the company cooperation, the professor never fails to express his concern, because in terms of the lecture, although the partnership benefit both the ice-cream and chocolate companies as long as they make different products, people will relate the chocolate-coated ice-cream to the chocolate company when the chocolate company starts to make ice-cream. Thus, the partner will become competitor.

獨立寫作

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? When people spend a lot of time watching sports on television or following their favourite team, it has negative effects on their lives. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

參考答案

As is known to all, everyone has his or her specific hobbies such as sports, dance, and reading books to make the life colourful. However, if we pay too much attention on such things, our life will be inevitably disrupted. I will state my arguments as follow. To begin with, it is common that many zealous fans will follow their favourite teams to nearly every place. That is, fees for transportation and tickets must be so expensive that they will take up a large proportion of life expenses. If these fans are rich, the concern I mentioned is not serious. Nevertheless, most fans are normal civilians with ordinary salary.

As a result, they must save money for their cost for following their teams, and thus, they must reduce their expenses on other items such as shopping and eating.Consequently, these fans’ life quality must be reduced.

 On the other hand, spending a lot of time watching sports programs alienates family members. To state it more clearly, many quarrels in a family are caused by the usage of television. There must be conflict when everyone wants to watch his or her own program.

Moreover, if people take too much time on watching matches, the time for family communication will undoubted decline.

In my final analysis, it is quite possible that the bad performance of one’s favourite sports team will negatively affect his or her mood in real life. To state it more clearly, few persons can be influenced by the inclination or be detached. Thus, many people will bring the anger or disappointment for the awful grade of their favourite teams into study, work and life. One of the obvious symptoms is the lassitude and the less patience, leading to low efficiency and more conflicts. In a word, it is pretty reasonable for us to reach a conclusion that this behaviour is negative.

 After all, life is composed of many more things. Fortunately, education has its own mechanism to recover.