托福大作文-個人成功類范文（七）

題目：
   Future career success relies more on relating to other people more than studying hard at school.
范文：
　　The definition of success varies from person to person. Some may attribute a successful life to diligence while others argue socializing abilities should be given more emphasis. As for me, success depends on communicative skills, teamwork spirit and social circle, which are easily available in a person who relate well to others.
　　Firstly, people who are good at bonding with others tend to know more about communicative skills. A man who used to chair student union has a better chance of winning in his future career. Since in the election of student union chairperson, the most popular boy/girl gets the most votes, people with such experience tend to have better interpersonal relationship. To assign tasks to teammates in organizing school affairs, one must know how to give clear description about task requirements and how to motivate others to contribute to collective activities. In this way his/her communicative skills is expected to increase accordingly. //On the other hand, those who are swamped in labs and libraries all day long barely know how to deliver an inspiring speech or persuade others into completing a task. So they fall short of necessary communicative skills to help them win in the pursuit of success.
　　Secondly, people who know how to relate with others also tend to show better teamwork performance. It is because collaboration plays a crucial role in a team. No matter how skillful a basketball player is, he can expect no career peak if he knows little about teamwork spirit. Michael Jordan rocked the world with his 3-pointer shoot at the last three seconds in the 1988 playoff. But without the pass from his teammates, he can hardly win the game. So cooperation and teamwork are taking on more importance in today’s world, without which personal strength cannot be given to full play. So if a man knows how to relate to others since school days, he surely won’t have such problem dealing with interpersonal relationship.
　　Thirdly, people who know how to win popularity tend to have more friends. Such social network is essential to future success. It is conceivable that a politically connected friend can easily help win a government contract for a real estate developer. Similarly, a writer gets to publicize his motivational books to college students if he has connections with school authorities. It is especially true in countries like China. Table culture, which means doing business while dining and drinking, entails one to be sociable and outgoing. If he has no interpersonal skills, it is hard to imagine the banquet is leading the business anywhere.