雅思寫作備考建議：學會視角寫作是關鍵

IELTS Writing Task 2: different perspectives

雅思大作文的視角寫作

A good way to organise your ideas is by thinking about the topic from different perspectives or points of view.

【他的觀點】從不同的視角和觀點來思考或探討話題是組織你的觀點的一種很好的方式。

I used the 'perspectives' technique to write a paragraph about the positives of more people living alone

Here's my paragraph with the perspectives highlighted:

【主體段視角寫作示例1】

The rise in one-person households can be seen as positive for both personal and broader economic reasons. On an individual level, people who choose to live alone may become more independent and self-reliant than those who live with family members. A young adult who lives alone, for example, will need to learn to cook, clean, pay bills and manage his or her budget, all of which are valuable life skills. From an economic perspective, the trend towards living alone will result in greater demand for housing. This is likely to benefit the construction industry, estate agents and a whole host of other companies that rely on homeowners to buy their products or services.

【小編點評】在探討獨居生活方式的有利面時，分別從個人層面（on an individual level）和社會經濟層面（from an economic perspective）進行講述，從小到大，從淺入深（并均配上了例子來佐證），層次感十足。當然不要忘記了開篇時的觀點句統(tǒng)領全段（positive for both personal and broader economic reasons），作者的用詞簡潔，但是毫無repetition之感。

Try writing about the negatives of the same trend, from two or three different perspectives.

【他的觀點】嘗試從正反量方面，通過不同的視角來討論一個話題。

IELTS Writing Task 2: tourism

Do the benefits of tourism outweigh the drawbacks?

Here are some ideas. I've organised the vocabulary according to different perspectives (different ways of looking at this issue).

【視角寫作示例2】

Positives of tourism:

1. Personal perspective: Tourism is a popular leisure activity. Tourists can relax, have fun, 'recharge their batteries', experience different customs and cultures (sight-seeing, sunbathing, visiting monuments, tasting new cuisine). Travel opens our minds. It can broaden our horizons.

2. Economic perspective: The tourism industry is vital for some countries. People rely on tourism for their income. Tourism attracts investment from governments and companies. It creates employment due to demand for goods and services (hotels, entertainment etc.). It helps to improve the standard of living.
 
　　Negatives of tourism:

1. Environmental perspective: Tourism can have a negative impact on the environment. Excessive building (roads, hotels etc.) destroys natural habitats and spoils the landscape. Tourism creates pollution and waste. It puts pressure on local resources such as food, water and energy.

2. Economic perspective: Tourism may cause a rise in the cost of living. Prices of goods and services go up. Tourists buy second homes. All of this affects local people.

3. Cultural perspective: Local traditions may be lost. Traditional jobs and skills die out (e.g. farming, fishing). Local people are forced to work in the tourist industry.

Thinking about topics from different perspectives can help you to generate better ideas. This technique isn't perfect for every topic, but it can be really useful.

其實，只要是這個話題成為了一個雅思作文題目，必然你是可以正著說有理，反著說有理，關鍵是你要學會在橫向和縱向上去討論一個問題。一般縱向上是指從小到大，即個人，集體，再是地區(qū)，然后到社會/國家/人類，這種不同層面上的視角。而一般橫向則是示例中的那種不同領域的，如經濟上的，環(huán)境上的，文化上的，政治上的，這些不同領域的視角。

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