說回到托福的考試,最近的一些話題就可以列舉一些時下正在發(fā)生的時事,而不是千篇一律的馬云和Steve Jobs,這樣完全可以給raters一個關心時事和獨立思考的印象哦!今天新通外語的韓心宇老師給大家一個托福寫作機經題目和結合時事的論證段,希望大家好好揣摩,最后形成自己的論證思路!
最近國際政治云譎波詭,遠的不說,韓國的政治就有點讓人摸不著頭腦。不過最近事件漸漸明晰,看來雙贏的破局已經不可能,樸槿惠的退休生活指日可待,只不過是時間問題和形式問題了。作為國內的吃瓜群眾,實在不知道說什么評語,只能提前祝福樸槿惠同志有一個幸福的晚年吧。
說回到托福的考試,最近的一些話題就可以列舉一些時下正在發(fā)生的時事,而不是千篇一律的馬云和Steve Jobs,這樣完全可以給raters一個關心時事和獨立思考的印象哦!醬紫的話,印象分up up肯定不話下了~
今天的韓心宇老師給大家一個托福寫作機經題目和結合時事的論證段,希望大家好好揣摩,最后形成自己的論證思路哦!
托福寫作題目:
Making decisions by ourselves or asking for other’s help?
托福寫作主體論證段1:
Making decisions by ourselves can provide us with precious opportunities to achieve independence. Let’s take into account this scenario: if we are dealing with certain questions, what first comes to our mind is to ask others for help; then we will be reluctant to think independently or to utilize our own wisdom to cope with the adversity, which will impede us from improving ourselves. With regard to these drawbacks, solving problems by ourselves manifests its significance. My view can be exemplified by a research conducted by my university: the researchers drafted a questionnaire, in which people choose what is the underlying reason of their success and achievement. The result indicates that 87% of the informants voted for “independent thinking”, indicating that thinking independently plays an irreplaceable role in our life. This figure further testifies to the importance of making decisions on our own. (141)
托福寫作主體論證段2:
Listening to others advice may lead to a passive situation, since we may make improper decisions and thus do harm to ourselves, or even to certain people related to the situation. There is a famous saying in China” the most suitable decision is the best decision,” so asking for others’ advice is simply not a wise way to make serious decision. Here is a case in point. Park Geun-hye is the current president of South Korea. However, she trusted the person from a mysterious cult simply because this person is her “bestie”. In this way, once this scandal was exposed, the whole country went angry, because the president should shoulder the responsibility of making important decision by herself and the most eligible person. Now, she is in a passive situation and nothing seems to ameliorate it. As we can see from this case, listening to others means we risk being misled by others. So, always relying on ourselves is the best choice without doubt. (165)
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