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雅思寫作怎么寫?雅思考官親身上陣告訴你!

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很多考生們都覺得考官給作文分?jǐn)?shù)很任性 為何自己抓不住雅思寫作的重點(diǎn) 頭疼?

 很多考生們都覺得考官給作文分?jǐn)?shù)很任性?為何自己抓不住雅思寫作的重點(diǎn)?到底該如何才能寫出一篇讓考官滿意的作文?

 
新姐今天就給大家?guī)砜脊賹懽髦笇?dǎo),望大家參考有所收獲,話不多說,跟隨新姐的步伐一起來看看吧!
 
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雅思寫作怎么寫?雅思考官親身上陣告訴你!
 
雅思寫作考官經(jīng)驗(yàn)
 
Answer all parts of the question。很多考生花費(fèi)大量的精力在詞匯句式的堆砌上。其實(shí)Task Response是四項(xiàng)評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中最容易提高的一項(xiàng),考官明確說明,如果你的文章沒有回答全部問題,你的TR這一項(xiàng)的分?jǐn)?shù)不會高于5。
 
A topic sentence for each paragraph。Make sure that each paragraph has a topic sentence!!!這一點(diǎn)相信所有的寫作老師都強(qiáng)調(diào)過,但是還是有序多學(xué)員忽略了這一點(diǎn)的重要性。這個(gè)中心句要直接明了,不要太模糊,讓考官讀完就是到你這段要講什么。一個(gè)中心句加三個(gè)展開論述句,這是考官給的結(jié)構(gòu)建議。
 
Use synonymous and paraphrase。高頻詞的同義詞替換是寫作詞匯部分學(xué)習(xí)的重要技巧。不要重復(fù)用相同的詞,同義詞的使用會向考官展現(xiàn)你詞匯運(yùn)用的range。這里考官強(qiáng)調(diào)注意一下替換詞的“性質(zhì)”。想表達(dá)positive的詞義就用positive的詞去替換,反之用negative。學(xué)姐給大家舉個(gè)例子,表示“影響”的詞,effect多用作積極意思,而impair多用作消極層面的影響。替換influence 的時(shí)候要選對性質(zhì)。如果你的詞匯量沒有那么大,那就學(xué)會掌握paraphrase的技巧,用一句話去解釋你想說的詞,順便還能用個(gè)從句或者分詞結(jié)構(gòu)增加一下句子多樣性。
 
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一篇雅思寫作中,最重要的就是立論!對于雅思寫作中的這種to what extent do you agree or disagree題型我們常常有3種立場。
 
 
跟隨新姐一起來觀摩觀摩考官是如何開頭的。
 
考官的三種開頭段寫法:
 
1. Agree同意
 
 
It is true that technology is developing at an incredible rate, and that traditional societies and cultural practices are disappearing as a result. I therefore agree with the view that technology and traditional cultures cannot coexist.
 
2. Disagree反對
 
 
Some people would argue that technological developments lead to the disappearance of traditional societies and cultural practices. I completely disagree with this view because I see no reason why technology cannot coexist with traditional cultures and even enhance them.
 
3. Partly agree / balanced opinion部分同意/中庸立場
 
 
Some people believe that technological developments lead to the disappearance of traditional cultures. While this may be true in the case of some societies or customs, others seem to be unaffected by technology and the modern world.
 
滿分范文,拿走不謝。
 
最后,在給大家?guī)硪黄脊俚臐M分范文,本篇范文使用第三種立論立論方法書寫,希望大家參考過后有所啟發(fā):
 
 
It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
 
Some people believe that technological developments lead to the loss of traditional cultures. I partly agree with this assertion; while it may be true in the case of some societies, others seem to be unaffected by technology and the modern world.
 
On the one hand, the advances in technology that have driven industrialisation in developed countries have certainly contributed to the disappearance of traditional ways of life. For example, in pre-industrial Britain, generations of families grew up in the same small village communities. These communities had a strong sense of identity, due to their shared customs and beliefs. However, developments in transport, communications and manufacturing led to the dispersal of families and village communities as people moved to the cities in search of work. Nowadays most British villages are inhabited by commuters, many of whom do not know their closest neighbours.
 
On the other hand, in some parts of the world traditional cultures still thrive. There are tribes in the Amazon Rainforest, for example, that have been completely untouched by the technological developments of the developed world. These tribal communities continue to hunt and gather food from the forest, and traditional skills are passed on to children by parents and elders. Other traditional cultures, such as farming communities in parts of Africa, are embracing communications technologies. Mobile phones give farmers access to information, from weather predictions to market prices, which helps them to prosper and therefore supports their culture.
 
In conclusion, many traditional ways of life have been lost as a result of advances in technology, but other traditional communities have survived and even flourished.
 
以上就是新姐給大家?guī)淼膮⒖純?nèi)容,請留下你的足跡,帶走我們的范文。
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