雅思寫作：如何提高雅思作文的可讀性？

今天小編就跟大家分享新通教育老師為大家?guī)�來的可讀性提高方法。

如何能夠讓的詞匯運(yùn)用“活”起來?方法之一就是在日常的當(dāng)中進(jìn)行翻譯。

階段1就是邊自己翻譯邊參看范文，專門積累認(rèn)識(shí)的但是想不到的單詞，那些不認(rèn)識(shí)的就放過去；階段2就是盡量完全自己翻譯，形成詞匯反應(yīng)。

下面提供一篇文章，按照老師說的步驟動(dòng)起來吧!

Some people think all children learn history in school is important. Some others think learning subjects more relevant to life is important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

當(dāng)今社會(huì)，教育對(duì)一個(gè)人來講起著至關(guān)重要的作用，尤其是學(xué)生。而學(xué)生在課堂上學(xué)的課程則非常重要。有些人認(rèn)為應(yīng)該把歷史課加入到學(xué)生每天的課程中，伴隨著一些非議說學(xué)生應(yīng)該學(xué)習(xí)那些和生活有關(guān)的更重要的課程。

In the modern society with strong competition, effect of education is significant for individuals, especially for students. Therefore, the course school arrange for students is the key to its best outcomes. It is commonly thought that history class should be added into daily curriculum timetable, with an arguable view that lessons related to practical life are more meaningful. (58 words)

歷史課/貫穿了從古至今的發(fā)展，變化，及對(duì)未來的聯(lián)系。

去讓學(xué)生更加好的了解自己國(guó)家的進(jìn)化過程乃至整個(gè)世界的發(fā)展，對(duì)于他們的前途是至關(guān)重要的。歷史課包含了一個(gè)國(guó)家從幾億年前到現(xiàn)在的演變過程，包括原始人，殖民期間，各種戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)，國(guó)家建立和統(tǒng)一及政府的統(tǒng)治等等，有助于樹立正確的價(jià)值觀，培養(yǎng)判斷事物的能力以及批判性思考的能力。

History class goes through the great development from the past to the present situation of a country, even to the close connection with the future. It's critical for students’ prospect to understand the evolution and development of their country, even of the whole world. History contains the huge evolution of a country from millions of years ago, including the original people, colony period, various battles, the unification of a nation and the rule of a government, which facilitate them to build up correct value system, cultivate the ability of judging facts and enhance their critical-thinking capability. (96 words)

然而，歷史不能在全方面幫助學(xué)生�，F(xiàn)在的社會(huì)競(jìng)爭(zhēng)很強(qiáng)，學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)壓力頗大，在課堂上寶貴的時(shí)間就留給了其他更重要的科目，比如科學(xué)，外語(yǔ)等等。這些科目直接聯(lián)系到了學(xué)生以后的生活。這些重要的科目給予學(xué)生的知識(shí)可以直接影響學(xué)生以后的工作，比如學(xué)好外語(yǔ)可以出國(guó)留學(xué)，找到更好的工作過更好的生活。

However, history classes cannot educate all-round students. The great competition in modern community pushes great pressure on students, so some other important subjects should be given more valuable class time, such as science, and English, which is directly connected with the future life of students. The essential knowledge taught by these courses is able to affect the vocation of students, for instance, either to learn a foreign language to go aboard for further education or to find a better job with high salary to ensure a good life. (88 words)

總結(jié)下來，這兩種說法都各有好處，也有各自的缺點(diǎn)，我們應(yīng)該取長(zhǎng)補(bǔ)短，適當(dāng)?shù)募尤霘v史課，但也要顧全其他重要重要的課程。

In conclusion, both these two options have their advantages and disadvantages as well. We should maximize its benefits and minimize the drawbacks. It will benefit students a lot if adding history courses properly and consider about other important subjects. (39 words)

相信大家對(duì)照之下就知道自己跟范文的差距在哪里了，多進(jìn)行訓(xùn)練，體味大家的翻譯，相信對(duì)大家的會(huì)有幫助。成績(jī)提高需要大量的訓(xùn)練，需要大家投入很多精力，希望同學(xué)們能積極進(jìn)行聯(lián)系，提高自己的寫作成績(jī)。今天的講解就到這里，如果同學(xué)們對(duì)還有任何的問題，

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