雅思寫(xiě)作中容易失分的幾個(gè)細(xì)節(jié)（一）

以下就是小編今天給大家分享的同學(xué)們經(jīng)常在當(dāng)中容易失分的細(xì)節(jié)部分，同學(xué)們可以對(duì)照自己的情況，看看自己的當(dāng)中有沒(méi)有這些小問(wèn)題。

 雅思作文——句子不完整

e.g. The most popular kind of transport was by road.

句中主語(yǔ)是the most popular kind of transport，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞(系動(dòng)詞)是was，而byroad按照語(yǔ)法應(yīng)該是方式狀語(yǔ)，此句缺乏表語(yǔ)。

應(yīng)改成：

The most popular kind of transport was road.

又如：Many factories in order to get more profits，which made waste water and waste gas.

去除目的狀語(yǔ)“in order to get more profits”和非限制性定語(yǔ)從句“which made waste water and waste gas”， 剩下的是many factories，不能作為一個(gè)句子。根據(jù)此句想表達(dá)的意思，應(yīng)改為：

Many factories in order to get more profits made waste water and waste gas.

雅思作文—— 雙謂語(yǔ)錯(cuò)句

There be句型屬于雙謂語(yǔ)錯(cuò)句高發(fā)句型，因?yàn)榫渲械腷e動(dòng)詞已經(jīng)是謂語(yǔ)，而句子后面的動(dòng)詞通常是定語(yǔ)從句中的成分，故不能作為主句中的謂語(yǔ)。例句中同時(shí)出現(xiàn)了“were”和“study”，根據(jù)上面的分析，were應(yīng)該是謂語(yǔ)，而study for career應(yīng)該是定語(yǔ)從句，因此，例句應(yīng)修正改成：

For those under 26，there were 80% students who studied for career. 或者For those under 26，there were 80% students studying for career.

又如：Causes for this phenomenon are comprehensive but the major reasons contribute to this problem can be identified from three perspectives. 應(yīng)改成：

Causes for this phenomenon are comprehensive but the major reasons contributing/which contribute to this problem can be identified from three perspectives

篇幅原因，細(xì)節(jié)問(wèn)題本篇就先給大家分享到這里，希望同學(xué)們能在平常的當(dāng)中注意這些細(xì)節(jié)。魔鬼藏在細(xì)節(jié)里，可能不知道什么時(shí)候就在你不經(jīng)意間犯下的一個(gè)小錯(cuò)誤就對(duì)你的帶來(lái)影響。當(dāng)然，新通教育為大家提供課程，如果同學(xué)們?cè)谘潘紓淇挤矫鏁r(shí)間不足，可以考慮通過(guò)雅思培訓(xùn)來(lái)迅速提升。