托福寫作中如何避免用詞句式空洞重復？

托福寫作評分標準中對考生作文的用詞和句式有所要求，如果大家寫出的托福作文中存在較多的用詞重復以及句式空洞等問題，那么得分不可避免地會受到一定影響。其實想要解決這類問題很簡單，學會改寫句式就可以應對。下面杭州新通外語學校的小編就為大家介紹具體方法。

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托福寫作如何避免用詞空洞?

1.一些空洞的單詞或詞組更本不能為句子帶來任何相關的或重要的信息，完全可以被刪掉。比如下面的句子：

When all things are considered， young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents，in my opinion.

這句話當中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion”都顯得多余。完全可以去掉。改為：Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents.

2. 有些空洞和繁瑣的表達方式可以進行替換，例如：

Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents， they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time.

“due to the fact that”就是一個很典型的繁瑣的表達方式的例子，可以替換，簡化為下面的表達方式：

Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents，they did not have the options that young people have now.

托福寫作如何減少內(nèi)容重復?

1.盡量避免重復使用同樣的詞匯�；蛘哂械臅r候雖然詞匯沒有重復，但意思卻有重復。這時候可以做一些簡化的工作。例如下面這個例子：

The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size.

Large 對一個farm來說就是size方面的large，所以in size可以去掉，改為：The farm my grandfather grew up on was large.

更簡潔的表達方式為：My grandfather grew up on a large farm.

2. 有時一個詞組可以用一個更簡單的單詞來替換，例如：

My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents' farm.

這里的over and over again就可以改為repeatedly，顯得更為簡潔：

My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents' farm.

以上就是關于托福寫作中避免用詞句式空洞重復的改寫技巧分享，杭州新通外語學校的小編希望大家能夠?qū)W會這些方法，提升作文的詞句質(zhì)量，獲得更好地作文得分。

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