提升托福寫作的表達(dá)水平

托福寫作中考生需要關(guān)注語(yǔ)法問(wèn)題，很多同學(xué)寫出來(lái)的句子雖然能夠讀得懂，但其實(shí)在native speaker看來(lái)都是相當(dāng)別扭的，一看就是chinglish的感覺(jué)。而想要寫出地道的句子，大家就需要在語(yǔ)法方面多下功夫。下面小編就為大家提供一些托福寫作語(yǔ)法選擇恰當(dāng)表達(dá)方式的改寫實(shí)例。

托福寫作語(yǔ)法表達(dá)改寫實(shí)例分析

選擇合適的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)可以使句子意思的表達(dá)更為精確和簡(jiǎn)練。雖然語(yǔ)法的多樣性也很重要，但選擇最恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)仍然是更為重要的考慮因素。以下，推薦幾種考生們?cè)诳紤]選擇何種語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)時(shí)可以參考的原則：

1.一個(gè)句子的主語(yǔ)和謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞應(yīng)該能夠反映句子中的最重要的意思。例如：

The situation that resulted in my grandfather’s not being able to study engineering was that his father needed help on the farm.

從意思上來(lái)分析，上面這句話需要表達(dá)的重要的概念是“grandfather’s not being able to　study”，而在表達(dá)這個(gè)概念時(shí)，原句用的主語(yǔ)是situation，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞是was，不能強(qiáng)調(diào)需要表達(dá)的重點(diǎn)概念，可以改為下面這句話：

My grandfather couldn’t study engineering because his father needed help on　the farm.

2.避免頻繁使用“there be”結(jié)構(gòu)。例如下面的句子：

There were 25 cows on the farm that my grandfather had to milk every day.It was hard work for my grandfather.

可以改為：My grandfather worked hard. He had to milk 25 cows on the farm every day.

更簡(jiǎn)潔的句式為：

My grandfather worked hard milking 25 cows daily.

3.把從句改為短語(yǔ)或單詞。例如：

Dairy cows were raised on the farm， which was located 100 kilometers from the nearest university and was in an area that was remote.

簡(jiǎn)介的表達(dá)方式為：

The dairy farm was located in a remote area， 100 kilometers to the nearest university.

4.僅在需要強(qiáng)調(diào)賓語(yǔ)而不是主語(yǔ)的時(shí)候，才使用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。例如：

In the fall， not only did the cows have to be milked， but also the hay was mowed and stacked by my grandfather’s family.

本句不夠簡(jiǎn)潔的原因是本句的重心應(yīng)該是“忙碌的家庭-my grandfather’s

family”，而使用了被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)后，仿佛重心變成了cows和hay。下面的表達(dá)方式是主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，相對(duì)來(lái)說(shuō)更簡(jiǎn)潔一些：

In the fall， my grandfather’s family not only milked the cow but also mowed　and stacked the hay.

5.用更為精確的一個(gè)動(dòng)詞來(lái)代替動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)。例如下面這句話：

My grandfather didn’t have time to stand around doing nothing with his　school friends.

Stand around doing nothing其實(shí)可以用一個(gè)動(dòng)詞來(lái)表達(dá)，即loiter：My grandfather didn’t have time to loiter with his school friends.

6.有時(shí)兩句話的信息經(jīng)過(guò)組合完全可以用一句話來(lái)簡(jiǎn)練地表達(dá)。例如：

Profits from the farm were not large. Sometimes they were too small to meet　the expenses of running a farm. They were not sufficient to pay for a university　degree.

兩句話的信息可以合并為下面這句更為簡(jiǎn)潔的句子：

Profits from the farm were sometimes too small to meet operational expenses，let alone pay for a university degree.

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