托福獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作策略之“贏在范文”

在托福寫(xiě)作備考時(shí)，高分范文是極具參考價(jià)值的�？忌鷳�(yīng)挑選題目新、話(huà)題多樣、寫(xiě)法全面的高質(zhì)量范文資料，這一點(diǎn)至關(guān)重要，倘若范文質(zhì)量欠佳，勢(shì)必會(huì)影響備考效率。然后，按照如下步驟使用范文資料：

第1 步，通讀30 篇高分范文，注意尋找文章的寫(xiě)作思路和主要論點(diǎn)，把握整體框架。以2013 年6 月15 日考題為例：

The way a person dresses in is a good indication of his/her personality and character. 通讀此文時(shí)，應(yīng)找到文章主要論點(diǎn)：1. 著裝習(xí)慣反映個(gè)人偏好;2. 著裝習(xí)慣透露了性格的某些方面;3. 除了著裝習(xí)慣，行為和舉止是性格的更真實(shí)體現(xiàn)。

第2 步，精讀10 篇范文，理清每句話(huà)之間的關(guān)系。如：Relatives were co-habitants inside a large house where more intimate relationships could be stably maintained and carried on. Nowadays, however, nuclear families are taking up the greatest ratio of social build-up... 這兩句話(huà)之間形成了轉(zhuǎn)折的邏輯關(guān)系。又如：Minor setbacks might cause a loss of confidence, or even produce overwhelming distress. Therefore I think it is unrealistic to expect a person who is down in spirit to accomplish their goals. 這兩句話(huà)之間形成了因果邏輯關(guān)系

第3 步，詳細(xì)分析10 篇范文，弄懂每句話(huà)內(nèi)部的關(guān)系以及每句話(huà)之間的關(guān)系。如：In addition, obsessed with computer games, children are gradually becoming slaves under the control of the pre-designed game modes. As a matter of fact, it is not only a waste of time, but may also considerably mislead children mentally... 在這段話(huà)中，標(biāo)志詞in addition 表明首句承前啟后，該句中，過(guò)去分詞短語(yǔ)obssessed with... 表原因，children are usually... 是原因所導(dǎo)致的結(jié)果。第二句是對(duì)首句的進(jìn)一步解釋說(shuō)明，注意not only...but also... 這個(gè)典型句式的應(yīng)用。

第4 步，選取經(jīng)過(guò)詳細(xì)分析的10 篇范文題目進(jìn)行仿寫(xiě)練習(xí)。

第5 步，再選取另外10 道題目進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作練習(xí)，完成后與范文對(duì)照，尋找自己的優(yōu)點(diǎn)與不足之處。