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 題目：It's more important for government to spend money to build art museums and music performance center than to build recreational facilities(such as swimming pool, playgrounds)

范文：

Some people claim that it’s crucial for government to spend money to build recreational facilities. This argument may seem reasonable. For example, I really like to do physical exercise but there is no swimming pool or basketball field nearby, so I have to postpone my exercising schedule.

Firstly, recreational facilities improve their physical health by provoking our interests to do physical exercise. For example, a swimming pool with clear water and beautiful sceneries around can captivate many customers in the summer and they will indulge in the comfort of swimming, enhancing their physical health. Secondly, residents，especially senior citizens, need places with recreational facilities to alleviate their pressure and to entertain themselves. This is because it’s an excellent time to chat with their friends，which will get rid of the annoying business but enjoy the breeze and sweat.

However, although recreational facilities may enhance our physical health, the tendency of injury is greatly increased. For example, breaking legs and wrenching the ankles are really common in the basketball or badminton fields, which hinders the students to take classes. Furthermore, recreational facilities will distract students from listening to the teachers carefully and attract them to play truant. So they don’t know what the important points in the exams and get an undesirable grade, upsetting their parents and reducing the chance to hang out with their friends.

Also, building art museums and music performance centers educates citizens, conveying positive and optimistic ideas to the audiences. For instance, <> painted by Picasso told us the crude and sorrow of war and the essence of peace. Therefore, students can experience the impressive beauty of products and then long for knowing more about the background and story of paintings and drawers. In addition, art museums and music performance centers are the important channels to not only preserve but also spread cultures. For example, Yugang Li, an iconic opera actor in China, performed in TorontoTheatre, bringing peaking opera to foreign friends, and communicated the essence of Chinese culture.  Therefore, only in a small room, citizens can wander around the world, knowing different dances and residents’ lifestyles.

Needless to say, although recreational facilities will help people to keep physical health and provide entertainments, the government should build art museums and music performance centers because they are educated and disperse cultures to other countries.

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