托福寫(xiě)作那些我們不能忽視的小細(xì)節(jié)

托福寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候，有些考生只顧著怎樣用經(jīng)典的句子加分，卻忽略了打好基礎(chǔ)。下面小編就說(shuō)一些其實(shí)是很小細(xì)節(jié)的問(wèn)題，雖然是我們?cè)趥淇嫉臅r(shí)候不太費(fèi)力的，但有時(shí)候也是扣分的要點(diǎn)。

1、用詞不當(dāng)

學(xué)生們寫(xiě)的作文里或多或少都會(huì)有一些用詞不當(dāng)?shù)膯?wèn)題，但是要注意的是一些最最基本的錯(cuò)誤是不能犯的。

In the show, if participators answer twenty problemsthat the host mentioned correctly, they will get five hundreds thousand U.S. dollars as a prize.

problems應(yīng)改為questions

2、拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤

這里的拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤不是指在考試時(shí)候的手誤，而是本身對(duì)詞匯拼寫(xiě)記憶的錯(cuò)誤。

In conclusion, issue of whether parents are the best teachers is a complex one, requiringsubjective judgement, consequently, there are no easy or certain answers.

judgement應(yīng)改為judgment

3、亂用大詞

First of all, children can earn money from their jobs, although there isn’t too much, but they willkeep their salary gingerliness.

這里的gingerliness根本是不知所云。該句子還有以下問(wèn)題：

1)該作文題目是講學(xué)生是否應(yīng)該做兼職，因此children的出現(xiàn)就顯得很莫名其妙;

2)although和but是不能連用的;

3)指代不明，they不知道是指代前面的什么;

4、表達(dá)中式

The second argument-it might have been noticed by others-is that in some occasion, it is quitedifficult to compare parents to teachers because parents are a kind of people, teachers are akind of vocation.

該句的表達(dá)過(guò)于中式化。

5、表意重復(fù)

They shocked their friends, devastated their families, crushed their best friends.

前面已經(jīng)提到了朋友，后面又提到朋友。

The show is so compelling but attractive.

compelling和attractive是同義詞，所以這里這么寫(xiě)就讓人不明白。

6、固定用法錯(cuò)誤

To some extends, I agree with the author’s general assertion that if parents also have acomprehensive sense of professional knowledge.

To some extends應(yīng)改為T(mén)o some extent

7、例證夸張

For example, when a doctor faces a patient who has got cancer, the doctor cannot tell thetruth, for the truth may cause the patient’s immediate death.

雖然善意的謊言是必要的，但是其功效顯然沒(méi)有這么大。

8、成分多余

According to a comprehensive investigation which is carried out by Chinese Academy of SocialSciences shows that there is an increase in the number of university students who are takingpart-time jobs.

該句中的shows that是多余的成分。

9、詞性混亂

However, the questions such as "Have you ever regretted marrying your husband" may be veryprivacy and embarrassingly.

句子中的privacy和embarrassingly應(yīng)該改成private和embarrassing.

10、時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤

托福大作文一般使用現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，除了拿過(guò)去事件作為例子，用過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。

Some people claimed that news media has enormous influence and is a detrimental creation.

claimed應(yīng)該改為claim.

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