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6、兩個簡單句之間缺乏連詞

如果用逗號連接兩個簡單句，那句子之間必須有恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，不能只用逗號來連接。

例12：Many Chinese students are good at their studies, they don’t have much social experience.

評析：逗號連接的是兩個獨立的含有主謂結(jié)構(gòu)的句子，兩個句子之間是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，必須加上表轉(zhuǎn)折的連詞(如but)，不能只用逗號連接。

更正：Many Chinese students are good at their studies, but they don’t have much social experience.

例13：I am a boy, I am strong.

評析：I am a boy和I am strong是兩個簡單句，中間可以加連詞，可以用分號，可以寫成兩句話，或是把其中一句改為非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)，但是不能只用逗號連接。

更正1：I am a boy, and I am strong.

更正2：I am a boy; I am strong.

更正3：I am a boy. I am strong.

更正4：Being a boy, I am strong.

7、從句獨立成句

從句必須依附于主句而存在，單獨一個連詞引導(dǎo)的從句不能用句點和主句隔開而獨立成句。

例14：It is more helpful for children to make mistakes and learn from their own mistakes. Because making mistakes sometimes is the best way to avoid more mistakes and to cultivate some valuable characters.

評析：Because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句不能單獨成句，必須依附于主句而存在�？梢园褍删湓掃B成一句，或是把原因狀語從句改為以it is because或this is because開頭的句子。

更正1：It is more helpful for children to make mistakes and learn from their own mistakes because making mistakes sometimes is the best way to avoid more mistakes and to cultivate some valuable characters.

更正2：It is more helpful for children to make mistakes and learn from their own mistakes. This is because making mistakes sometimes is the best way to avoid more mistakes and to cultivate some valuable characters.

8、詞性誤用

考生在記單詞的時候容易只記單詞的意思，不注意詞性和用法，導(dǎo)致名詞、動詞、形容詞、副詞之間詞性誤用的情況。這樣的錯誤比較嚴重，應(yīng)該避免。

例15：He worked industrious all day.

評析：句中的industrious是形容詞，不能修飾動詞。形容詞用于修飾名詞，副詞可以修飾動詞、形容詞和副詞。

更正：He worked industriously all day.

9、代詞錯誤

代詞方面的錯誤主要是代詞與其所指代的名詞單復(fù)數(shù)不一致。

例16：As a person, sooner or later, they will meet some problems.

評析：句中的they作為復(fù)數(shù)代詞與其所指代的名詞person單復(fù)數(shù)不一致，應(yīng)用單數(shù)形式的代詞。

更正：As a person, sooner or later, he or she will meet some problems.

10、介詞后面跟動詞原形

介詞后面不能跟動詞原形，必須跟名詞或動名詞。

例17：People splash water to each other for celebrate their new year.

評析：介詞for后面不能跟動詞原形celebrate，可以改為動名詞形式。

更正：People splash water to each other for celebrating their new year.