托福寫作考試備考方略：常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤四則請(qǐng)繞行

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1、用詞不當(dāng)

學(xué)生們寫的作文里或多或少都會(huì)有一些用詞不當(dāng)?shù)膯?wèn)題，但是要注意的是一些最最基本的錯(cuò)誤是不能犯的。

In the show，if participators answer twenty problems that the host mentioned correctly，they will get five hundreds thousand U。S。 dollars as a prize。

problems應(yīng)改為questions

2、拼寫錯(cuò)誤

這里的拼寫錯(cuò)誤不是指在考試時(shí)候的誤打，而是本身對(duì)詞匯拼寫記憶的錯(cuò)誤。

In conclusion，issue of whether parents are the best teachers is a complex one，requiring subjective judgement，consequently，there are no easy or certain answers。

judgement應(yīng)改為judgment

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3、亂用大詞

First of all，children can earn money from their jobs，although there isn’t too much，but they will keep their salary gingerliness。

這里的gingerliness根本是不知所云。該句子還有以下問(wèn)題：

1)該作文題目是講學(xué)生是否應(yīng)該做兼職，因此children的出現(xiàn)就顯得很莫名其妙;

2)although和but是不能連用的;

3)指代不明，they不知道是指代前面的什么;

4、表達(dá)中式

The second argument-it might have been noticed by others-is that in some occasion，it is quite difficult to compare parents to teachers because parents are a kind of people，teachers are a kind of vocation。

該句的表達(dá)過(guò)于中式化。

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