雅思寫(xiě)作高分攻略——增加語(yǔ)言表達(dá)生動(dòng)性

雅思考試聽(tīng)、說(shuō)、讀、寫(xiě)四門(mén)科目中，對(duì)于中國(guó)學(xué)生來(lái)說(shuō)寫(xiě)作是弱勢(shì)項(xiàng)目。根據(jù)四項(xiàng)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，學(xué)生在經(jīng)過(guò)基礎(chǔ)、強(qiáng)化課程后對(duì)于TA（應(yīng)題）與CC（結(jié)構(gòu)與段落內(nèi)論述邏輯）兩項(xiàng)要求有明顯進(jìn)步；但是，對(duì)于LR（詞匯量及準(zhǔn)確性）與GR（語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)與準(zhǔn)確性）兩項(xiàng)較為薄弱。特別是對(duì)于要求寫(xiě)作6分以上的學(xué)生，流暢自然的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)、豐富多樣的句型更是必不可少的學(xué)習(xí)要點(diǎn)。本文將列舉常見(jiàn)集中增加語(yǔ)言表達(dá)生動(dòng)性的方法，以供考生備考及老師備課。

一、 避免使用語(yǔ)意較弱的“BE”動(dòng)詞——少用簡(jiǎn)單的主系表結(jié)構(gòu)

（1） 表語(yǔ)轉(zhuǎn)換為各種不同形式的修飾語(yǔ)。

e.g. This method is effective and it is helpful to the students.

Revision:  The effective methods benefit students. (表語(yǔ)轉(zhuǎn)化成前置形容詞；表語(yǔ)轉(zhuǎn)換成行為動(dòng)詞)

（2） 表語(yǔ)轉(zhuǎn)換為動(dòng)詞

e.g. His academic performance is as good as expected by his parents.

Revision: His academic performance meets his parents’ expectation.

（3） There be 句型改寫(xiě)（Be動(dòng)詞后的名詞改為句子的主語(yǔ)）

e.g. There is no opportunity for promotion。

Revision: No opportunity for promotion exists.

二、 避免使用MAKE, LET, HELP詞組，多用語(yǔ)意具體的動(dòng)詞。

e.g. Technology makes the poor easier to become rich.

Revision: Technology bridges the gap between the poor and the rich.

e.g. Telecommuting lets employees feel relaxed.

Revision: Employees work under less pressure and enjoy a relaxing atmosphere by Telecommuting.

三、 避免使用籠統(tǒng)詞匯表達(dá)，增加分類話題詞匯深度

e.g. some TV programs can enlarge audience’s knowledge.

Revision: some TV programs, especially, the quiz show, can enlarge audience’s knowledge.

e.g. Soldiers will benefit from the technological equipment during disaster.

Revision: Soldiers will benefit from the communications equipment during natural disaster.

以上簡(jiǎn)單介紹了三種增加雅思寫(xiě)作語(yǔ)言表達(dá)生動(dòng)性的方法，主要為表語(yǔ)的多樣性變化，THERE BE 句型變化、學(xué)生常用MAKE, LET等詞匯具象性表達(dá)及用下義詞及形容詞避免籠統(tǒng)詞匯的表達(dá)。除以上三類，學(xué)生還需注意避免使用語(yǔ)意冗長(zhǎng)累贅的詞語(yǔ)，及濫用一些陳舊詞語(yǔ)或者難懂的專業(yè)術(shù)語(yǔ)。語(yǔ)言的提升是漫長(zhǎng)的過(guò)程，學(xué)生需注意平時(shí)的積累，老師在學(xué)生習(xí)作中應(yīng)注重學(xué)生語(yǔ)言表達(dá)的糾正。

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