托福獨立寫作論點判定

Independent Writing

對于Independent Writing部分，根據(jù)文章評分標準，獨立寫作應該具有清晰地論點且有清晰地細節(jié)來證明論點是對的，現(xiàn)在就來簡述一下論點的寫法

1. 什么是論點和論據(jù)

論點=這段文字的主題句=概括這段文字的整體概念

論據(jù)=讓我們的論點更有說服力

2. 一個論點需要的基本要點

是一個陳述句; 疑問句、感嘆句等不可用比較簡潔，明了

3. 論點的廣義定論

論點=這段文字的主題句=概括這段文字的整體概念

稅收好(大觀點)---- 政府有錢------建立很多有用的設(shè)施-------幫助很多人(中式)

稅收好(大觀點)---- 幫助很多人(論點)-----政府有錢------建立很多有用的設(shè)施(西式)

4. 怎么寫論點

A. 論點是容易展開的：細節(jié)是容易展開來證明論點是真的，不可以只寫論點，可以用多種細節(jié)來證明論點是真的，例如像解釋，舉例子等

B. 論點要完整：論點包括題干和中心思想，不可以在論點中只有一個思想，但是題干完全不提，容易跑題且不完整

C. 論點要關(guān)注于某一方面，不可以太寬泛,否則會顯得很雜亂

l E.g. Some working parents believe that children centers can provide best care for children, while others think other family members like grandparents can do this job. Which one is better?

Firstly, there are more professional teachers in children centers thereby causing parents prefer to send children to there.

Firstly, children centers could provide more professional educational care to students.

根據(jù)上題可看出，正確的論點應該是第二個，因為第一個論點是一個比較難展開的細節(jié)，所以文章寫起來會出現(xiàn)“無話可寫”的情況，對于第二個論點，第一個點更像是細節(jié)支撐

論點是容易展開的

E.g. working alone when taking part in many activities. Do you agree or disagree with this way?

Firstly, working in a small group enables young kids how to work together with the others in the team.

Firstly, working in a small group enables young kids to foster some abilities and social skills.

問題同上，正確的論點應該是第二個，第一個更像是對場景的描述，第一個造成的最后的結(jié)果就是第二個;這也符合我們所說的，論點是一個最終的結(jié)果，一個概括的事物

論點要完整

E.g. Some people prefer to work for a large company. Others prefer to work for a small company. Which would you prefer? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.

To begin with, working in a big company is beneficial to enlarging one’s social circle.

論點盡量不要用it指代，要改寫題干

論點要關(guān)注于某一方面，不可以太寬泛

E.g. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents should allow their children to make mistakes and let them learn from their own mistakes.

First of all, learning from mistakes is helpful for children.

First of all, allowing children to make mistakes and to learn from mistakes can help children to be independent.

第二個才是正確的，雖然第一個點也可以被展開，但是對于“幫助性的”這個詞其實基本上沒有細節(jié)意義，與其說是論點，這個點其實和觀點;論點太寬泛，雖然能展開，但是方面涵蓋太多，導致的結(jié)果就是細節(jié)混亂，可能考生沒有辦法具體拆分。第二個就是一個很好地論點范本。

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