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01 句子結(jié)構(gòu)不完整

結(jié)構(gòu)不完整的句子是雅思寫作中的常見錯(cuò)誤。例如 Because air polluton is harmful to human heatth. 在正式文體中because 引導(dǎo)的白子，只能用作分句，不能單獨(dú)使用。

正確的句子應(yīng)該是 Because air pollution is harmful to human health, all men must have the awareness of protecting environment.

又如：Ten boys playing football 句子中缺少謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。正確的句子應(yīng)該是：Ten boys are playing football!.

02 逗號(hào)分割句子

逗號(hào)分隔句子也是寫作時(shí)較為常見的一個(gè)問題。例如：The number of cars deareased from 10 to 20 units between April and May, this increased to 5 in June.

逗號(hào)前后分別有兩個(gè)帶有主謂結(jié)構(gòu)的句子，這是逗號(hào)的一種誤用。改正的方法多種，一種是將逗號(hào)改為分號(hào)，即：The number of cars decreased fom 10 to 20 units betveen April and May:this increased to 5 in June. 分號(hào)的使用是很多中國(guó)學(xué)生不太熟悉的。也可以使用連詞來解決這一問題。該句可改為：The number of cars decreased from 10 to 20 units between April and May, and this increased to 5 in June.

03 缺少標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)

與逗號(hào)分割句子相反，該用標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)的時(shí)候卻沒有使用，也是不正確的。

例如：Iin the past she worked in foreign company 這句的正確寫法應(yīng)為：In the past, she worked in foreign company.

04 銜接詞邏輯錨誤

銜接詞邏輯錯(cuò)誤在考生的作文中是常見的。舉個(gè)例子：Frank was a famous orator, and he was most famous for his discovery of e-bike. 這句的錯(cuò)誤在于后半句應(yīng)該是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，,連接詞卻使用了 and， 應(yīng)該使用 but 才準(zhǔn)確。

05 指代模糊

請(qǐng)看這個(gè)例句：When Ronnie declared himself to Jack, he was aghast 這個(gè)句子的he 指代 Ronnie 還是 Jack,指名不清，正確的句子應(yīng)該是 Ronnie declared himself to Jack, who was aghast.

另例：Riding a new bike, the dog chased him a mile. 根據(jù)這個(gè)句子的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)，意思應(yīng)該是“狗騎著新車追了他一英里。”顯然不合乎邏輯，應(yīng)改為 When he rode a new bike, the dog chased him a mile.

06 主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)和被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)混用

在一個(gè)句子里，應(yīng)該避免主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)和被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)混用，還要保持時(shí)態(tài)一致。例如：We could hear raucous sounds from the party as the house was approached.

正確的句子應(yīng)該是 We could hear raucous sounds from the party as we approached the house. 7 fI: We looked forward to the party and it was greatly enjoyed. We looked forward to the party and enjoyed it very much. (V)

07 時(shí)態(tài)混用錯(cuò)誤

由于漢語(yǔ)的動(dòng)詞沒有時(shí)態(tài),所以中國(guó)學(xué)生對(duì)時(shí)態(tài)的學(xué)握較為薄弱，有時(shí)會(huì)無意識(shí)地出現(xiàn)這方面的錯(cuò)誤。例如：went into the room, closed the door, and goes to bed.

這個(gè)句子前兩個(gè)動(dòng)詞是過去式,后一個(gè)動(dòng)詞用了現(xiàn)在時(shí)，顯然是時(shí)態(tài)不統(tǒng)一的。正確的句子應(yīng)該是 He went into the room, cosed the door, and went to bed.